Alice is Dead - Ep 3 -BAM Review-
SPOILER ALERTS
First of all, the pros. Your art was splendid, as was the voice acting and sound effects. The music was great too. The plot carried on smoothly from Ep. 2 to Ep.3. But here the pros end.
First of all, there are too much unused items. I mean, what was with that damn bell? And why was there a slot machine in the kitchen? Why are there so many mysteries? And the fatal flaw that prevents me from giving this game a 10 is the many plot inconsistancies. First of all, who was doctor Raymond Burr, and why did he die? And how do fish relate to the cats he was experimenting on? He WAS working on Oystercloud after all, which is why it rained fish. And who was sending you messages in the secret lab? Who was the Queen, and why was he at the bottom of the building with the elevator? There are so many things left unsolved, and it has burned a whole in my mind. You should follow the quote you cited by Lewis Carrol. I am sorry, but I have to take of three marks for your unfinished plot. Please complete the plot, by any means. You dont have to make a fancy game to discribe it, just finish what you have started.
One thing that I must ask for now though. Was Mary Ann the portrayed singer in the club? She resembles the singer, and you get a text from Mary Ann as soon as you walk in the club, saying that it's "good to SEE you alive.". Just curious.
infect. evolve. repeat.